John M. Slaton: Revision history

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13 August 2024

  • curprev 01:1501:15, 13 August 2024 imported>Jiaoriballisse 21,002 bytes +21,002 The phrase "convicted for" is less precise than "convicted of," which is the correct preposition used with "convicted." "Represented a conflict of interest" is more precise and accurately describes the nature of the issue."Co-founded" is more precise than "started" when describing the establishment of a firm with another person. The comma before "long afterward" is unnecessary and disrupts the flow of the sentence"Onscreen" is a compound word